silence, man’s favourite food for you
feeds you every time you call
eating more but becoming less
ride up the hem to let them see skin
draping over your ribcage
so you never forget where you came from
only a part of something so much more whole
man likes to see the top of your head
your wings his favourite punching bag
fingers leashed around your neck
pray your knees bruised
swallow
the words you want to speak
swallow
everything about him
smile, but don’t show too much teeth
dentist hands hunting for a cavity
filling you with sweet lies
waiting for him is still time spent with him
11pm, the first time you hear from him all day
man likes it when you wait
for him, but not for your first time
give, give, give
he asks your camera lens dirty
man loves it best when he pushes you off a cliff
so he can talk about saving you
Wowwww so dark!
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Hope you liked it!
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I like it! Nope, I mean…. love it so so so much!
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This is so deep! I really like the last 3 lines 💫 Brilliant post! 💕
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Awww thank you so much Elsie! 💖
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I’m sorry for your experience. This doesn’t read like it’s from a mutually kind space.
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Thank you so much. It’s not all personal though – I draw a lot of inspiration from what I see others around me go through and combine it with my own experiences
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Powerful, intense, and beautifully written! The flow and phrasing lend potency to the words. I can recognize the truth behind your words, even though it is hard to admit that my own gender acts this way. Very well written!
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Why does a woman work ten years to change a man, then complain he’s not the man she married?
Barbra Streisand
She ought to know!
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Thank you so much Brad! This really means a lot x
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In a way subtle yet so vivid
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Thank you Nivedhitha! 💖
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The intensity in this maaaaan!
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Ahhhh thank you!
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You welcome
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I feel so sad – not how anyone should be treated – heaven have mercy on us
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wow this is beautifully written!
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Thank you so much ! ❤
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Every line hits hard and just when I think the impact can’t be anymore powerful you throw in this line “man likes it when you wait
for him, but not for your first time”
Thank you, this is raw, brutal, direct and all the better for it.
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Thank you for this comment! Really appreciate it x
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The lines hits real. wow!
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Thank you for this Donald! x
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This is quite beautiful. How much of our power we give away to others, allowing them to grab our wings, our beautiful wings. Powerful images in just a few words!
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Thank you ❤ I completely agree – may we always try our best to hold on to our wings!
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Brutal, with some great images; definitely gets the message across. On first word I started off thinking you would be leaning towards the warmth displayed in Ronan Keating’s ‘you say it best when you say nothing at all’ kind of silence, probably because I had just read another poem about silence with an altogether much softer cuddly feel, but it didn’t take long before you quickly changed my mind! Well done; loved it….
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Thank you so much for such a lovely comment! Ahh all the different ways to portray something – one of my favourite things about poetry
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Beautifully compelling expression of the tears withheld and the horrors concealed. The beast in every man is his dark imagination. He imagines himself a god able to control his own world and, more poignantly, the people in his life. This control is manipulative, but it is also ultimately a sad absurdity, which you capture so well with your poetic style and word choice. The lies are forced into us, as you aptly state with the reference to the dentist, and we are left with suffering souls in search of the flickering candlelight fading in and out of the black.
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Wow, this is such a gorgeous comment! Had to read it over a few times to properly appreciate it. Thank you so much!
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So sad…
and written with powerful verbal twists.
The harsh experience of too many.
Sometimes,
I look at my gender…
and I question how much I want to wear it.
But I hope somehow to redeen that
in how I wear my humanity.
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Thank you so much! It’s people like you who are so important in actioning change and I’m so glad for that x
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Can’t stop appreciating this eye-opener!!!
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Ahh thank you so much! x
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Pain and pathos in a relationship……. bond that many do not, cannot break….. very well written.
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Thank you! x
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The last lines blew me away. Stupendous ! Well done , keep writing.
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Thank you! I really appreciate this x
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