tell me it was all just for the thrill of it
nothing else
the way he held your hand first
before ever seeing it
and it was late, closer to dawn than
your bedtime, so that
even reality had fallen asleep
how there was daylight, even at 12am
the rain searing steaming skin
hummingbirds swirling like autumn leaves
and there was no space to dance but so much
to pray
he presses his hand against your chest
watches it beat
against a glass door, you blink
flirtation written across your eyelids
and he is reminded
of how close you are to the edge, how easy
it would be
to fall
it hits you like spiked punch the next morning
you, flying
with one helium balloon tied to your wrist
you, falling
with his hand on yours
you, hurling dirty laundry with a detached tongue
come with me
if we abandon enough train tracks we’re bound
to end up somewhere familiar
if there is a road that never ends i’ll whittle it down with you
there is nothing pretty about
a crying girl, ever
no matter how soft, how delicate
just call it a mess and we can start cleaning up
call it quits and we can finally move on – stop
calling
leave a message and i’ll get back to you
tell me you enjoyed it in the moment, at least
Got emotional so fast 😦 😦
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Ahhh hope you liked it! x
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yessss I did ❤ ❤
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Wonderful writing as always Melody 🌷
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Thank you as always Ellie xx
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Beautiful as always.
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Thank you! xx
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beautiful…sad
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Thank you Emily! x
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So raw. Comes from a deep place!
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Thank you Mona! It really does x
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very well written, I like the way you express emotions here.
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Thank you David! 🙂
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Great writing!
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Thanks Chris! 🙂
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Even reality has fallen to sleep, beautifully written so heartbreaking the ending. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you so much – glad you liked that line xx
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Well done
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Thank you 🙂
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