the city wakes without pressing snooze
before heat closes in like a fist
a man brushing dust from his
shoes, that settles
no matter how little he walks
the boy, hands the size of a toy car remote
gripping the handlebars of a motorbike for one
two siblings stacked behind him
and i learn
an elderly beggar
eyes punched full of a shame that trickles
down her face, binds shut her lips
wordlessly pleading for survival
is humanity stripped down to its most raw
but still, how the sun remembers
to fondle angkor wat on its way to the sky
paints a strip of fire the width of one grace
along the horizon each morning
if the lotuses can make the choice
over and over
to build a home in this land
if i can cross the road with my eyes closed
reach the other side safely
and the child who has never known her parents
can smile like the rich men haven’t in years
i think
perhaps there is an oyster here after all
Beautifully crafted and written. I love your unbridled expression!
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Thank you Brad! 🙂
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Wonderfully done! A gem!
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Thank you so much! x
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This is a good poem. You’re going beyond your angst and writing about the world. I love your rapid-fire metaphors, and the way you use them to slide through the story that you tell. And your last line “there is an oyster here after all” is brilliant!
May I please reblog this poem?
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Oh thank you Penny! This piece was inspired by a recent volunteering trip to Cambodia. Of course you may reblog it! xx
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Thank you, Melody!
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beautiful! stunning
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Thank you Emily! xx
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Beautiful poem
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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this was SO good melody– keep writing!!
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Awww thank you! This means a lot x
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Thank you so much for the reblog! x
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Reblogged this on Autumn Leaves and commented:
This beautiful poem was written by a talented Australian poet. I think we’ll hear much more of her work in years to come!
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Thank you so much for this! xx
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Quite moving. The details, the images you describe are vivid.
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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Good!
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Thank you!
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A nice piece, it takes a deep thinking person to write this
Kudos
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Ah thank you so much! This means a lot x
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Love the observant and insight
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Aww, thank you x
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We left Cambodia a few months ago after three years with a school there. This poetry took me back – perfect imagery – it’s hard to imagine it fully if you’ve not experienced it: the heat, the families on motos, the poverty (and unfulfilling wealth), crossing the road!! It speaks well of the hardship there but also of the hope. It’s a pearl of a poem.
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Oh wow that’s awesome – hope you enjoyed your time there! Yep, you totally get me then
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Yup. This is good. And yes, I too have gathered with the hundreds waiting for sunrise at Angkor Wat. Your image captures that inexpressible moment.
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Nothing quite like it, right?
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love this.
a man brushing dust from his
shoes, that settles
no matter how little he walks
And: still how the sun remembers / to fondle angkor wat
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Thank you Claire 😊
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Thank you for the reblog! x
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