the single mother-of-three with a week-old messy bun opens her mouth
and i see enamel carcasses, moth-bitten
gnawed away by a decade-long meth addiction
anxiety grinding down her cusps into tetrominos
that bite when trying to fit together
last month she almost killed herself
and the shadows have continued to skulk in her sulcus
yet still, she smiles
the elderly pensioner with a rusted walker opens his mouth
and i see pink gums on pink tongue
twenty-nine teeth harvested already
only three still left out in the cold
something dark has creeped into the gums, loosened them
a canine quivers in the breeze of a shaky breath
tongue withered from a cornucopia of medications
yet still, he smiles
the prepubescent skeleton with wrist scars opens her mouth
and i see teeth penned behind a row of barbed wire
bulimia licking clean the backs of her incisors
the ‘last’ kgs before goal weight caught
at the back of her throat, too far back for fingers
peer pressure burning a chasm into her palate
panic attacks burrowing a home in the fissures of her molars
yet still, she smiles
So gritty and thought provoking.
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Thank you!
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Wow! This is a great post with a dynamic perspective. Your imagery is nuanced yet compelling.
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Thank you Brad! What a lovely comment x
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wow-well written
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Thank you Rupa!! x
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Using the commonality of teeth to represent our common humanity is a good concept. The last stanza brought tears to my eyes.
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Aww thank you so much Penny! This is really touching 🙂
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I love this! Beautiful! Thank you 🙏
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Thank you so much! x
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I love this ♥️
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Thank you ❤
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Raw and crafted beautifully ♥️
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Thank you for this ❤
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Welcome ♥️
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Wow. That’s some light and dark wrapped together in a very real way.
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Thank you Andrew! x
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I love the grotesque and raw imagery in this 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
SMILES DON’T COST MUCH—BUT LIGHT UP THE WORLD!
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Aw, thanks for the reblog! x
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You be welcome!
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i don’t know, but i guess that you work in a dental clinic that caters to those most challenged by everyday life. the images are stark and wonderful, the meaning subtle, yet powerful. thank you for sharing it. john
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Hi John, thanks for the comment! Yes, you’re absolutely right! I am currently a dental student, and we treat many patients in the public healthcare system. This was what the poem was inspired by 🙂
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This is fabulous! Deep ghought behind seemingly simple words…
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Thank you xx
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This poetic fable is so remarkable. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thanks!
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Powerful!
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Thank you!
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This is a well crafted, raw and a master piece. The imagery speaks is so outstanding and narrates all there is in this poem
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Oh, thank you! This is such an amazing comment x
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When done, internalising this poem, with a sigh.
It speaks and walks the title
yet still, they smile
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Pretty much what I was going for! Thanks for this x
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