And in the last moments, even with a dictionary in front of me,
My tongue still flails around, lost for words,
Because whatever I say, the words don’t quite taste right;
The letters don’t settle properly in the air,
And so I keep snatching them back before your ears can catch them,
Until all we can do is stare at each other in silence,
Everything we want to say tangled in our vocal cords.
Our remaining seconds drip through like the water in a leaky faucet.
I once told you I wished we could freeze time,
But now I realise that even if we had,
Clasping the ice in my palms would only make it melt faster,
And no matter how tightly I pressed my fingers together, water would ooze through anyway.
There are only so many times I can squeeze the life out of you with my hugs
Before I start to wonder if maybe I’m suffocating you.
I know you don’t know this, but that night, I released a piece of my heart into the sky,
So that, from now on, whenever you wake up to a scarlet-dyed sunrise
You might just be reminded of me,
Because it’s finally dawning on me that this is what goodbye truly means.
Forever isn’t supposed to come to an end, and yet here we are;
The last grain of sand is about to slip through the hourglass, join the rest.
I wish I could slip through and be with you that way,
But the neck is too thin, and maybe it’s for the best.
The pen is out of ink, the book is out of pages.
Did we write too much? Did we read too fast?
Please visit, even if it’s only in my dreams.
Heartbreaking. Been there.
I liked:
“Clasping the ice in my palms would only make it melt faster,
And no matter how tightly I pressed my fingers together, water would ooze through anyway.”
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Thank you. Sometimes that’s exactly what I feel when I try to savour or slow down time
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Well it works very well here. Horrible feeling.
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loved it !
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Thank you! I appreciate you stopping by and reading 🙂
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Great metaphors in this poem of heartbreak.
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Thank you!!!
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This was powerful. I really enjoyed it.
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Thank you! That means a lot
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This is so beautiful.
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Thank you, I really appreciate that
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A beautiful write indeed
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Thank you for taking the time out to read this piece 🙂
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All my poetry goes for nothing in moments like those. Too many times I have not learned how to speak, and I carry still those unexpressed yearnings and losses.
Perhaps in the end it comes down to “Ouch… Thank you… Sorry… Goodbye…” yet even that eludes me sometimes.
Blessings on your sharing. I hear you.
Thank you.
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Thank you for your comment. Yes, it’s so difficult to say goodbye. I agree with you that any eloquence preserved from written poetry vanishes into thin air when I try to farewell someone. It must be due to our efforts to create a ‘perfect’ ending… but it’s a shame that we sometimes simply can’t express our feelings.
I hope that you’ve forgiven yourself for the unexpressed yearnings and losses that you carry around.
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This touched me. it hit so very close to home. Thank you for writing it and posting it.
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Thank you. I’m glad you were able to identify with it
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I wrote a poetry piece “Words and Memory” that conveys similar sentiment https://choko111.wordpress.com/2016/09/11/words-and-memory/
But I must say your “Goodbye” poem is on of the “So many that said it better” that my poem mentions 🙂
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Thank you for the compliment, and thank you for sharing! I love the lines
“If you could hear just what I think
Would my words tilt you past the brink
And make you fall down the abyss?
Convey to you just what I miss?”
The overall rhyme scheme is really quite lovely 🙂
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Thank you! But I still think you captured the mood better than I did. 🙂
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Thank you, I’m very flattered 🙂
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Very lovely and deep.
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Thank you!!
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Bittersweet and true……beautiful.
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Thanks, I really appreciate that!
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Beautiful ❤
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Thank you for stopping by and reading!
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YAAASSS! You speak to me!
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Thank you for your lovely comment! I’m so glad that you were able to relate to this poem!
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You’re welcome. I love your writing. 🙂
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Stunning–I’m otherwise speechless.
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Wow, that’s very flattering to hear. Thank you 🙂
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You’re most welcome 🙂
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Huh, and you have to go and I come back in your dreams? *shattered* my heart right now.
I love it, thanks for stopping by on my blog. Not Goodbye. This time I am staying on the blog. *winks*
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I’m glad you liked it. Feel free to stay 🙂
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This poem really hit home for me, expressing many of the things I’m feeling right now. Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us.
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Thank you for your comment. I’m glad I was able to reach out to you with my writing.
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Words fail. All I can think of is: beautiful.
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Thank you! 🙂
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Thank you for visiting my blog, and more importantly, this writing touched my soul. You truly have a gift.
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Thank you, that’s honestly amazing to hear
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I can identify with many things you put there. Many times “words don’t quite taste right”
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I’m glad you could identify with this poem. Isn’t it funny that there are so many words to choose from, yet so few that are ‘right’?
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Very powerful…
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I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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Oh wonderful. I love the way you’ve expressed all the things you couldn’t express.
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Thanks! Oh, if only words had come that easily when I had wanted them to…
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I know what you mean. Sometimes having too many things to say can leave you saying nothing and hoping that your silence speaks for you instead.
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Too true! I do believe silence conveys a lot more than we think
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Yes.
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brilliant post. we are told while young not to use two words – ever and never. as you mature you begin to experience and see the reason why you should never say or believe in forever. you should never say never because you haven’t lived tomorrow. same reason you should never say forever.
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Thank you for your thoughtful comment 🙂 I actually was never told not to use the words ‘ever’ and ‘never’, but I definitely see where you’re coming from. It is rather a pity that even the best things in life, no matter how much we love them, won’t last forever, and goodbyes are a prime example of that.
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my pleasure
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Ah… and you try to slow down but then everything rushes past even faster
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Yes – exactly!
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